Weekend Writing Warriors #5

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LOGLINE: A recent college graduate accepts an overseas position with a U.S. based oil company in Kazakhstan where she is mistaken for an international spy.

It is from my WIP comedy/mystery spy novel called Expat. Think: Spies Like Us meets “New Girl.” ;) Enjoy! This is experimental writing with an outline. I thought it would be fun to write a novel exclusively for Weekend Writing Warriors. *I’m intentionally leaving some parts out because I want to query this manuscript to literary agents after I’m done. And, don’t want to give away everything!! P.S. Thanks for suggestion on her eyes (I changed) – I’m sure this entire story will be rewritten a zillion times – I’ll have a guy in the next chapter notice Tammy’s eyes!! LOL. Writing this in third person multiple POV. I’m trying to make a conscious effort to write in mostly Tammy’s (my heroine’s) Point-of-View. But, some of the suspenseful scenes help push plot forward and require my reader to know what’s going on when Tammy’s left the “building.”

In this scene, Tammy is at her college graduation ceremony. This is during the mingling part right before the graduates start queuing for their diplomas inside the stadium. Tammy has just spotted her dad and his wife (Tammy’s young stepmom.) There’s lots of beginning in this chapter, but for WWW, I skipped ahead.

(This scene/snippet is in Tammy’s POV – my young heroine)

EXPAT

by

Carrie Crain

CHAPTER TWO
The Briefcase

The sweet smell of jasmine from the Dogwood trees scented the spring air, practically kissing Tammy’s pallid skin as she elbowed her way through the crowd over to her dad, Norm, and his young wife. Tammy was twenty-two years old and had never truly forgiven her parents for divorcing six years ago.

“Why did you bring Kari?” She whispered in his ear, fists clenched, demanding an answer.

“Because Tammy, Kari’s my wifey pooh pooh.” Tammy rolled her eyes as she watched Norm wrap his arm around Kari’s skinny weenie waist and yank the blonde bombshell closer. Kari’s extra large bouffant stood motionless as she teetered precariously in her glitzy stilettos, holding on tightly to a brown leather briefcase for balance.

Weekend Writing Warriors #3

Expat-BkCv

Novel website can be found here.

LOGLINE: A recent college graduate accepts an overseas position with a U.S. based oil company in Kazakhstan where she is mistaken for an international spy.

Hello my fellow Sixers! I am so excited to participate in the Weekend Writing Warriors!! www_banner

I’m working on many projects, from short stories, to novels to screenplays and a TV Pilot. And, last week, I had inquiries from a literary agent for three of my stories! To say I’m nervous would not suffice. This year, I will be sending off my very first movie I filmed to the comedy film festivals as well as other popular festivals like Sundance and Cannes. The movie and book can be found here. My TV Pilot tentatively called COLD-DE-SAC has a comedy spy theme. The website can be found here. The following excerpt picks up immediately following last week’s snippet. It is from my WIP comedy/mystery spy novel called Expat. Think: Spies Like Us meets “New Girl.” ;) Enjoy!

EXPAT

by

Carrie Crain

CHAPTER ONE
Foreign Language

He cracked his knuckles.

“I’m not going to lie!” Tammy stood straight; surprised that Eddie would even suggest such a ridiculous move.

“Tammy, you’ll never leave HeeHawVille and get a good paying overseas job if you don’t speak another language. I know you want to get the heck out of Oklahoma.”

Tammy and Eddie had been close friends since meeting at the Massidy private high school when they were both freshman. The sound of clicking distracted her. She looked across the room at students hammering away at computers. “Um – yeah, sure.” There was a slight hesitation in answering him.

Weekend Writing Warriors #1

Expat-BkCv

Expat-BkCv

Novel website can be found here.

LOGLINE: A recent college graduate accepts an overseas position with a U.S. based oil company in Kazakhstan where she is mistaken for an international spy.

Hello my fellow Sixers! I am so excited to participate in the Weekend Writing Warriors!! www_banner

I’m working on many projects, from short stories, to novels to screenplays and a TV Pilot. In fact, this year, I will be sending off my very first movie I filmed to the comedy film festivals as well as other popular festivals like Sundance and Cannes. The movie and book can be found here. My TV Pilot tentatively called COLD-DE-SAC has a comedy spy theme. The website can be found here. The following excerpt is from my WIP comedy/mystery spy novel called Expat. Think: Spies Like Us meets “New Girl.” ;) Enjoy!

EXPAT

by

Carrie Crain

CHAPTER ONE
Foreign Language

Tammy Klimber scooted the chair closer to the computer screen. “Perfect,” she smiled.

“There’s only one thing missing from your résumé,” Eddie Neece snickered. His freckly arm nudged her gently on the shoulder.

“Oh yeah, Eddie? What?” Tammy asked smugly. She tucked her straight chestnut hair behind her ear as she stood up allowing Eddie momentarily to take control of the scene. She glimpsed the blackboard at the front of the Career Services Lab at the university, and there marked in white chalk read: Making the transition from academic life to a chosen career — congratulations 2013 graduates.

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